@thealternativecycle Hi, prelove...just didn't want you to think that you are being ignored. Saturday night is usually kind of quiet around here, but I will take a look at your listings first thing tomorrow morning and let you know my thoughts...and welcome to the Part Time eBay Sellers Group Home ~ where learning is fun!
@thealternativecycle Since you are new to the eBay posting community, FYI ~ it is always best to start a new thread when you have a question rather than tacking on to an existing thread as quite often the last posts don't get read.
I think your pictures are fine ~ a neutral background and lots of pics including care tags...good going! You can purchase a half form very inexpensively on eBay...couldn't hurt but I don't think they are necessary.
I would suggest beefing up your descriptions ~ the oft sited suggestion is to describe like there are no pictures and use pictures like there is no description.
You are using measurements which is great, however, try using the term "underarm" rather than "armpit"...sounds a little more professional! 
Also, let the buyer know "how" the measurements were taken, i.e. "laying flat" and "length from middle of neckline to hem", etc.
Titles are probably one of the most important things in a listing...on your CAbi top listing...ditch the #823 as very few would search using that number ~ CAbi Tank Cami Multicolor Cotton Top Size 4 ~ you want to get as much "searchable and pertinent" information into the first several words of the title.
There are over 13,000 CAbi tops listed on eBay right now...yup, 13,000! This is a tip that has helped me quite a bit when listing in a saturated category. Use the "Sold" option on the left side of the page and then select "highest price" and click on a bunch of listings until you can ascertain the sellers with the highest sell through rates and look and copy how they are wording their titles.
If you have more questions, fire away...someone is usually around to help...and best of luck!
