What do you think of my listing that I have up?

[filpphone]

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[dippitydoo]

Hello and welcome to selling on Ebay!  Your listings look fine.  There is a typo on the Nike one, where you write "they are washed and smell's clean",  you can revise the listing to correct it to "smell".  Another suggestion is to add the actual measurements of the shorts; length, waist, etc.  Good luck!!

-Dippity

[pikabo-icu]

They look fine.. dippitydoo gave you some good tips.

I wish you much success and try to have fun..

Happy Birthday again..

CHEERS

[katzrul15]

On the men's shorts I think you need better pictures and measurements in the description and perhaps a better idea of the overall condition.  Most Buyers already presume they do not smell.  Lay the garment flat and take pictures - holding them up like that it is really hard to envision the shorts as a whole.  In the description I would want a waist and length and inseam in order to know if purchasing them they would fit - Medium is a really wide range of size.

(not being mean, you asked what do we think). 

Used (I like to call it Previously enjoyed) clothing is so saturated on this site.  You need better Titles as that is premium real estate - use all the characters to describe what you are selling (add color and any other details you can pertinent to the garment itself;  Include in the description or Item Specifics what it is made of, i.e. cotton, polyester, how can it be washed/dried, care, etc)

We typically do not sell used clothing unless it is really in demand - our items are NWT.  Hopefully someone who sells used clothing will be along soon to give you better pointers.  Good luck!

[filpphone]

Thank you. They are washed and ''smell's'' clean I edited the listings.

[mtgraves7984]

You need more pictures of the shorts. Lay them flat and shoot the front and back and all of the tags.

It wouldn't hurt to put NCAA/Florida Gators in the title of your Colosseum pair and try to identify the logo on the AND1 pair... adding it, too. (I can't tell from your photo.) Oh, and change your phone title to 'Flip' phone. 

[filpphone]

Thank you for the advice. I am leave it way it is.  

[filpphone]

Thank you for the advice. I am leave it way it is.

[mtgraves7984]

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@filpphone wrote:

Thank you for the advice. I am leave it way it is.

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@filpphone 

No problem. And it's every man for himself here.. I respect your decision. Good luck to you and welcome aboard.

[filpphone]

Thank you for understanding.😊

[fern*wood]

They are washed and ''smell's'' clean.

That's not the correction mentioned earlier.  The word smell's with an apostrophe isn't the correct way and they didn't mean for you to also add the quotation marks around it.   If you must mention it, then use the word smell.   Most people assume they are clean and washed, so I wouldn't say that at all.

[filpphone]

Also got one watcher so far on the flip phone.

[kathieskorner]

From your previous replies I am not sure you really want advice, but I will re-enforce what others have said.  Please get rid of the hands in your photos, and show the items flat.   More information in your title would help - color, material, logo - anything that will set it apart from the thousands of other similar listings.     Good clean pre-owned condition sounds better than "washed and smells clean".   Measurements in the description would also help.  

[filpphone]

Thank you for your advice. I am keep it way it is. 

[filpphone]

Thank you for your advice. I am keep it the way it is.