09-01-2021 11:13 PM
I'm not so impressed with the listing right now. No traffic. What are the shortcomings of my listing?
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09-02-2021 08:31 AM - edited 09-02-2021 08:36 AM
You wanted some critiquing. So, here ya go.
Most of your titles are a nightmare.
Too many words that have nothing to do with the product. Don't say book, laptop, notebook, stationary, jar, etc., when you are selling paper stickers. Decal might be a misleading word, too. There's a difference between a peel off sticker and a decal.
You're selling a floor sticker but when you click on the listing it shows a floor sticker but the description says it's a crystal wall lamp luxury bedside lamp resin wall sconce modern light. Which not only is not what you are selling but that description would also be misleading if you were selling a lamp. It's misleading because if it's a resin lamp it's not a crystal lamp. And what is it, a bedside lamp which I would think is a small table lamp or is it a wall sconce? All those extra words are confusing sellers .
The bottle holder should not have the word shelves in the title as it's not a shelf.
The details on the resin elephant says it's a handmade item but we know it's from a Chinese factory and nobody has carved that from a block of resin.
The peacock wall lamps says couple when the accurate description is pair if it's 2 you're selling.
Wooden boats should not be called figurines. They're not exactly figurines.
The pen holder has pencil box in the title and it's not a pencil box. Why is Galaxy in the title? What is an ift?
The hip flask says 5oz Gallon. Gallon should not be in the title.
Why do you have dairy in the title when those are fruit stickers?
The smoking nuns describe it as a poster but you also say painting and canvas. It can't be both. It's a painting on canvas or it's a printed poster. Same thing goes for the peeing poster.
The monkey holding a light is a table lamp yet you have ceiling in the title. That is not a ceiling lamp.
Why do you have Nordic as a description?
Your zippered food storage bags say bottle and the picture shows the zipper bags but it also shows bottle containers so that is misleading.
09-01-2021 11:39 PM
You've got some great stuff!
Try making your titles closer to natural speech. This rather famous print for example:
Black and White Cyclist Peeing Poster Decor Bicycle Wall Art Print Canvas
Could be:
Bike Racers Pee Break Retro Black and White Poster Wall Art Print
Search is getting closer and closer to natural speech.
Front load your titles: You want the subject first (bike racers at a bathroom break), then (since it's decor), the type of item (black and white poster art). "Black and White" isn't the subject, but what the cyclists are doing is.
09-02-2021 01:36 AM
You're dropshipping the same junk from China that hundreds of others are dropshipping, your almost three month delivery window will chase away most buyers, and your low feedback is not helping you.
09-02-2021 04:18 AM
@tandygo wrote:I'm not so impressed with the listing right now. No traffic. What are the shortcomings of my listing?
I'm not impressed with your listings either.
I would never buy anything shipped or drop shipped from China.
09-02-2021 05:19 AM
You're dropshipping stuff from China that can be picked up in almost every dollar store.
09-02-2021 06:51 AM
You need real photos, not stock photos of the items.
And you really need to sell items you are in possession of. Have you ever actually seen the quality (or lack thereof) of the items you have listed?
Good luck, be safe.
09-02-2021 06:51 AM
Sell things that are unique and made in Sri Lanka not overpriced junk from china.
09-02-2021 08:31 AM - edited 09-02-2021 08:36 AM
You wanted some critiquing. So, here ya go.
Most of your titles are a nightmare.
Too many words that have nothing to do with the product. Don't say book, laptop, notebook, stationary, jar, etc., when you are selling paper stickers. Decal might be a misleading word, too. There's a difference between a peel off sticker and a decal.
You're selling a floor sticker but when you click on the listing it shows a floor sticker but the description says it's a crystal wall lamp luxury bedside lamp resin wall sconce modern light. Which not only is not what you are selling but that description would also be misleading if you were selling a lamp. It's misleading because if it's a resin lamp it's not a crystal lamp. And what is it, a bedside lamp which I would think is a small table lamp or is it a wall sconce? All those extra words are confusing sellers .
The bottle holder should not have the word shelves in the title as it's not a shelf.
The details on the resin elephant says it's a handmade item but we know it's from a Chinese factory and nobody has carved that from a block of resin.
The peacock wall lamps says couple when the accurate description is pair if it's 2 you're selling.
Wooden boats should not be called figurines. They're not exactly figurines.
The pen holder has pencil box in the title and it's not a pencil box. Why is Galaxy in the title? What is an ift?
The hip flask says 5oz Gallon. Gallon should not be in the title.
Why do you have dairy in the title when those are fruit stickers?
The smoking nuns describe it as a poster but you also say painting and canvas. It can't be both. It's a painting on canvas or it's a printed poster. Same thing goes for the peeing poster.
The monkey holding a light is a table lamp yet you have ceiling in the title. That is not a ceiling lamp.
Why do you have Nordic as a description?
Your zippered food storage bags say bottle and the picture shows the zipper bags but it also shows bottle containers so that is misleading.
09-02-2021 12:02 PM
Yes, there are definite problems in the titles.
They have some fun posters and, yes, a lot of the usual drop shipped stuff, but that incoming tide floor decor is cool, too.
09-02-2021 12:27 PM
@tdumonde2014 wrote:You're dropshipping the same junk from China that hundreds of others are dropshipping, your almost three month delivery window will chase away most buyers, and your low feedback is not helping you.
None of your pointers should avoid this seller from becoming a hugh Ebay success story 😀.
Ok, maybe the 11/24 ETA is a turn off. 🤔
09-02-2021 12:31 PM
After you finish your listings, you need to look at them before they go live.
And the word you're looking for is (I think) "title".
09-02-2021 10:01 PM
Thank you so much for pointing out. Thank you so much for looking at all my listings and taking the time to point out the right thing. I will correct my mistakes.
09-02-2021 10:03 PM
Thank You
09-02-2021 10:05 PM
Can you explain further?
09-02-2021 10:09 PM
Thanks